Change in Murder Weapon

After our first draft was assesed by the class, the feedback and our own analysis showed that the murder weapon we had originally been using had to be changed as it wasn't clear to see in the production. We decided that instead of a pole which had been soemhow broken off of a road sign being used as a weapon, we were going to use a brick. The feedback we received made it clear that it was not clear enough or at all what the murder weapon was and that this somewhat went about making our storyline slightly unclear. So we decided that we were going to make it clear to the audience what the weapon was. We did this by reshooting all of the shots in which the weapon was and should be shown in. One of the main weapon shots is when there is a high angle shot of Matt and Billy (Me) standing on the mud ledge above the lifeless body. Billy (Me) then drops the brick which then is clearly followed by the camera and you can clearly see it fall to the foot of the body not only suggesting but this time showing that the brick is the weapon which was used to kill the boy.